Wow this is really great. The handrawn element is very good. The only thing i have a problem was the story. Please listen to me on this. The whole introductory sequence of the writing was confusing and didnt add much to the film. You have to keep the audience in on the story without giving away too much in the first bit like you did. There are other ways to explain a story in visuals and in dialogue. The other thing i also had a problem with was the characters. They didnt move the story along well and were rather boring. You need to drive a story on characters and their relation to the plot. The plot was what? They destroyed the earth? They did it in a rather uncouth fashion if you ask me. The Interactive scenes also didnt add anything to the movie - if i can push buttons for the character why cant i choose the path and the dialgue as well? It seems to be a great misjustice. You have some great talent though and i thank you for your movie. You definitely have the potential to be one of the best on NG, just work on the storytelling.
Did you email the creator and ask his permission to post HIS work on Newgrounds that HE spent many hours on? Post your own work or post with permission. I apologise if you have asked for his permission(tho it should say so in the comments section) and if you havnt asked his permission, do so next time - i wouldnt like someone fucking with my work and getting SOME credit or a name to it. And some people like to have some copyright associated with their work.
i remember those old adventure games where if you clicked on something you would die - and it wasnt fun at all. Just like this game. Oh click on the clue - know the answer advance forward - dont know - game over, killed by knowledge. The clue is fucken stupid and why should you have to answer a question to go down a fucken path? gameplay bites man.
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All 53 flash Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 10, 2001
cool
good work
Rated 5 / 5 stars July 8, 2001
can anyone honestly beat 23?
This game is wikked and more addictive than solitaire. Can anyone out there honestly beat my top score of 23?
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars May 27, 2001
yawn
yawnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Rated 3 / 5 stars May 12, 2001
great style but lacked good story
Wow this is really great. The handrawn element is very good. The only thing i have a problem was the story. Please listen to me on this. The whole introductory sequence of the writing was confusing and didnt add much to the film. You have to keep the audience in on the story without giving away too much in the first bit like you did. There are other ways to explain a story in visuals and in dialogue. The other thing i also had a problem with was the characters. They didnt move the story along well and were rather boring. You need to drive a story on characters and their relation to the plot. The plot was what? They destroyed the earth? They did it in a rather uncouth fashion if you ask me. The Interactive scenes also didnt add anything to the movie - if i can push buttons for the character why cant i choose the path and the dialgue as well? It seems to be a great misjustice. You have some great talent though and i thank you for your movie. You definitely have the potential to be one of the best on NG, just work on the storytelling.
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars April 28, 2001
haahah
haha this is stupid.
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 23, 2001
yer
dude sloth rules, hes like my favourite character on NG next to Perverto and Captain Pixel
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 21, 2001
good
great work
Rated 0 / 5 stars April 20, 2001
yer
Did you email the creator and ask his permission to post HIS work on Newgrounds that HE spent many hours on? Post your own work or post with permission. I apologise if you have asked for his permission(tho it should say so in the comments section) and if you havnt asked his permission, do so next time - i wouldnt like someone fucking with my work and getting SOME credit or a name to it. And some people like to have some copyright associated with their work.
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars April 17, 2001
yer
i remember those old adventure games where if you clicked on something you would die - and it wasnt fun at all. Just like this game. Oh click on the clue - know the answer advance forward - dont know - game over, killed by knowledge. The clue is fucken stupid and why should you have to answer a question to go down a fucken path? gameplay bites man.
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 3, 2001
Yawn
Its boring, but its different to the other crap. And the pre-loader in itself deserves a ten.