The-OveRLorD's Reviews

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Wow this is really great. The handrawn element is very good. The only thing i have a problem was the story. Please listen to me on this. The whole introductory sequence of the writing was confusing and didnt add much to the film. You have to keep the audience in on the story without giving away too much in the first bit like you did. There are other ways to explain a story in visuals and in dialogue. The other thing i also had a problem with was the characters. They didnt move the story along well and were rather boring. You need to drive a story on characters and their relation to the plot. The plot was what? They destroyed the earth? They did it in a rather uncouth fashion if you ask me. The Interactive scenes also didnt add anything to the movie - if i can push buttons for the character why cant i choose the path and the dialgue as well? It seems to be a great misjustice. You have some great talent though and i thank you for your movie. You definitely have the potential to be one of the best on NG, just work on the storytelling.